Friday, 4 December 2015

Personal Statement

Living in a HDB flat, we usually dry our wet clothes by hanging them outside using bamboo poles. There were times where I didn't manage to get to the kitchen on time to bring in the bamboo poles during sudden rainfall. I think this new technology will be very beneficial for me and my neighbors.

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  2. Hello Diyanah,

    Short and sweet personal statement , but perhaps you can include at the introduction part some background on your polytechnic course, which i believe is green building, it might be more impact-ful for your personal statement. Also I think you can include that Singapore is a tropical country with heavy rainfalls throughout the year. Nontheless its just my comments. Goodjob.
    Cheers,
    Nic

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  3. Hi Diyanah,

    I also have this trouble of bringing in my clothes during rainy days so... I usually leave them hanging out there. Hahah just joking because my mum will get really angry with me. I feel that your statement is easy to understand and clear. But I agree with nicholson- perhaps you can add in a sentence for some background.

    - yanyan

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