Living in a HDB flat, we usually
dry our wet clothes by hanging them outside using bamboo poles. There were
times where I didn't manage to get to the kitchen on time to bring in the
bamboo poles during sudden rainfall. I think this new technology will be very
beneficial for me and my neighbors.
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ReplyDeleteHello Diyanah,
ReplyDeleteShort and sweet personal statement , but perhaps you can include at the introduction part some background on your polytechnic course, which i believe is green building, it might be more impact-ful for your personal statement. Also I think you can include that Singapore is a tropical country with heavy rainfalls throughout the year. Nontheless its just my comments. Goodjob.
Cheers,
Nic
Hi Diyanah,
ReplyDeleteI also have this trouble of bringing in my clothes during rainy days so... I usually leave them hanging out there. Hahah just joking because my mum will get really angry with me. I feel that your statement is easy to understand and clear. But I agree with nicholson- perhaps you can add in a sentence for some background.
- yanyan